Write about a fear you have overcome.

 Prompt Response: One fear that I have overcome is my fear of heights. When I was younger I was terrified of heights but all my friends loved to do activities like rope courses and go on roller coasters. I would force myself to do these activities with them because I didn't want to seem like I wasn't "cool" or not be able to hang out with my friends. I remember one time my friend and I went to Stone Mountain and she really wanted to go on the high ropes course. I agreed because I wanted her to have fun. The whole time I was on the course I was terrified and had to talk myself into just taking the next step. As I have gotten older, I have been in so many situations that require me to be up high that I am used to it. I am no longer afraid of heights, I just don't enjoy them. I overcame this fear by forcing myself into situations that I did not want to be in. 

Summary: Today in class we reviewed our submissions in Writable and analyzed the mistakes. 

Reflection: This will help my skills in explaining my evidence well and giving more specific details. These are the points I seemed to miss as seen on my feedback so I will have to work on that. 

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